UmbrellaMadeItHereAtLast
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For a writer (and a MOTHER) the writing in her latest post is shockingly bad.
And the real magic happens when a client then starts suggesting and these changes themselves, and feeling that buzz. THAT is learning.For a writer (and a MOTHER) the writing in her latest post is shockingly bad.
Wow, that's really really bad grammar!And the real magic happens when a client then starts suggesting and these changes themselves, and feeling that buzz. THAT is learning.
The above paragraph was written by Liz. I can see at least three errors.
That so-called feedback doesn't read like it's written by novice writers. It reads like it has been carefully crafted and spell-checked by somebody else.Wow, that's really really bad grammar!
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Ok, if this whole retreat thing was orchestrated via Instagram, surely some of the retreat attendees follow her on there? Why no comments, tags, shared stories ? Nothing! I'm not even convinced it happened! Her last 3 posts containing alleged testimonials have ZERO comments. That's really really embarrassing.
I actually thought the Mothers Day card may have been dictated by the ex. Naughty, I know, but I am reliably informed by Mr Google that the word "Mutha" is short for "taboo word Motherxxxxer". I think we might be talking subliminal messages through the innocent medium of Mothers Day cards. The idea of the card not being as innocent as it seems has - for me - trumped the sizzling sausages of scorn in the Liz/Mike vendetta, that's for sure! (For new cleaners, the sizzling sausages of scorn relates to a post Ms Fraser made years ago during one of the many times Mike had stomped off in a huff. She photographed some sausages sizzling in a pan and triumphantly claimed that she could FINALLY EAT MEAT! Think M was going through an annoying veggie phase at the time.)Strange focus for a child’s Mother’s Day card considering that Scout wasn’t on the paragliding/ stale bread and warm wine in the roadside gutter trip.
Strong vibes here that it’s another forced pic so Liz can show off her naked body.
#controlfreakvibesandheraMOTHER!
That one post you just wrote is far better and more entertaining than anything I've seen of hers! You should head off to Venice pronto and start telling people to 'write YOU. Be YOU' etc. Even those phrases, her mantras, are grammatically incorrect! How can you 'write you?' Something like 'write from your heart' or 'write your truth' would possibly make more sense. Sorry. Pedantic author alert.I actually thought the Mothers Day card may have been dictated by the ex. Naughty, I know, but I am reliably informed by Mr Google that the word "Mutha" is short for "taboo word Motherxxxxer". I think we might be talking subliminal messages through the innocent medium of Mothers Day cards. The idea of the card not being as innocent as it seems has - for me - trumped the sizzling sausages of scorn in the Liz/Mike vendetta, that's for sure! (For new cleaners, the sizzling sausages of scorn relates to a post Ms Fraser made years ago during one of the many times Mike had stomped off in a huff. She photographed some sausages sizzling in a pan and triumphantly claimed that she could FINALLY EAT MEAT! Think M was going through an annoying veggie phase at the time.)
Of course, she didn't actually SAY that the ne'er-do-well had done one (yet again), this was what we had to work out through the medium of the sausage post. Which of course we did, because we are clever cleaners.
I giggled like a loon about the sausages, and am still slightly obsessed by that post!
But Mutha's Day might come a close second!
Oh I laughed. Copy editing for over 20 years, seemingly everything but her own posts!And the real magic happens when a client then starts suggesting and these changes themselves, and feeling that buzz. THAT is learning.
The above paragraph was written by Liz. I can see at least three errors.
I’m also intrigued by the urgency to post a review. Did she block the door until she’s approved a review? They didn’t have time to get home before postingThe testimonials are more damaging than no testimonials at all, because they have no names, no tags, no replies.
Yes, she’s an embarrassment of clichés. You got this (). You be you. You write you. Godamm (, always spelled incorrectly). Venice Baby! (). Half mara (). She (every city, ). I break out in a cringe sweat when I read it. That’s just a couple.
And 'I bloody love....' (sun, Venice, drinking in Oxford, 'you lot' etc)Yes, she’s an embarrassment of clichés. You got this (). You be you. You write you. Godamm (, always spelled incorrectly). Venice Baby! (). Half mara (). She (every city, ). I break out in a cringe sweat when I read it. That’s just a couple.
I've been thinking about this and the way in which she constantly bigs herself up. She did once publish quite a lot - books, journalism etc - so she had some idea of how the industry worked, yes. But that was some years ago. The industry has changed beyond recognition now - not helped by the arrival of AI - and trying to get an agent or publisher now is totally different to how it was when she got started. In short, and I'm not trying to be offensive at all by saying this btw - the publishing industry now does not really want the middle-aged, middle-class white writers of yesteryear. It's just a fact, and I have suffered from this too as I'm a similar age to Liz and had most of my success at a similar time. Things are WAY different now - authors are expected to be either very young, very diverse, or both, or have had some extraordinary life-story which they're writing about, or actually be living the same thing they're writing about, etc etc. It's really hard to resurrect what you had say 15-20 years ago and I think that it's a mistake to even try. In my own case I'm relaunching under a pseudonym when I write the next one, because even with a 'name', publishers are not interested when they find out how old you are and that you've been around the block. Depressing, but true!It is interesting to note from these ‘testimonials’ that Ms Fraser had obviously done much research into ‘how the publishing industry works’ and what is ‘required of an author these days’ to be able to pass this valuable information on to her delegates. I’m glad to see she is bringing value to her courses, and putting in the groundwork and familiarising herself on these things before hosting them. I look forward to reading of her delegates’ publishing successes - and her being thanked - in The Bookseller.
I've been thinking about this and the way in which she constantly bigs herself up. She did once publish quite a lot - books, journalism etc - so she had some idea of how the industry worked, yes. But that was some years ago. The industry has changed beyond recognition now - not helped by the arrival of AI - and trying to get an agent or publisher now is totally different to how it was when she got started. In short, and I'm not trying to be offensive at all by saying this btw - the publishing industry now does not really want the middle-aged, middle-class white writers of yesteryear. It's just a fact, and I have suffered from this too as I'm a similar age to Liz and had most of my success at a similar time. Things are WAY different now - authors are expected to be either very young, very diverse, or both, or have had some extraordinary life-story which they're writing about, or actually be living the same thing they're writing about, etc etc. It's really hard to resurrect what you had say 15-20 years ago and I think that it's a mistake to even try. In my own case I'm relaunching under a pseudonym when I write the next one, because even with a 'name', publishers are not interested when they find out how old you are and that you've been around the block. Depressing, but true!
See also strong 'social media engagement'. It's essential in so many industries now, and well, Liz's is atrocious. Looking at people like Bryony Gordon, Fern Cotton, Helen Thorn, Giovanna Fletcher et al, even if they're not your cup of tea it's undeniable that they understand that social media is paramount to success nowadays. Helen Thorn in particular has done a great job incorporating her parenting, running etc into an online presence without dragging her ex constantly. Remember all the crying posts Liz did? Really did herself no favours putting that crap online.I've been thinking about this and the way in which she constantly bigs herself up. She did once publish quite a lot - books, journalism etc - so she had some idea of how the industry worked, yes. But that was some years ago. The industry has changed beyond recognition now - not helped by the arrival of AI - and trying to get an agent or publisher now is totally different to how it was when she got started. In short, and I'm not trying to be offensive at all by saying this btw - the publishing industry now does not really want the middle-aged, middle-class white writers of yesteryear. It's just a fact, and I have suffered from this too as I'm a similar age to Liz and had most of my success at a similar time. Things are WAY different now - authors are expected to be either very young, very diverse, or both, or have had some extraordinary life-story which they're writing about, or actually be living the same thing they're writing about, etc etc. It's really hard to resurrect what you had say 15-20 years ago and I think that it's a mistake to even try. In my own case I'm relaunching under a pseudonym when I write the next one, because even with a 'name', publishers are not interested when they find out how old you are and that you've been around the block. Depressing, but true!