peebleweeble
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If you looked in Stef’s Twitter it would put you off hiring him for anything. Whatever your political beliefs, you don’t have to be a massive dick on Twitter.
I think they are both really quite nasty at their core.Neither would I, we got to know them so well, they are both so judgemental.
If this extract from his novel is the part he wishes to share after three years of writing he has zero hope of getting it published. Stick to the wedding videos Stef.
It's not only painful but, again he's using words he doesn't understand. If it's set in the UK, we do not have native deer with 'blazes' on their face. 'Transient' - means a person who doesn't stay long. In the animal world, transient means : "Those that have negative local population growth rates at a given site and that show up only occasionally as a result of dispersal from some adjacent source habitat."What a painful read.
It's not only painful but, again he's using words he doesn't understand. If it's set in the UK, we do not have native deer with 'blazes' on their face. 'Transient' - means a person who doesn't stay long. In the animal world, transient means : "Those that have negative local population growth rates at a given site and that show up only occasionally as a result of dispersal from some adjacent source habitat."
He's basically got a thesaurus and messed up! This is why people study creative writing for years before attempting to write a book. Stef's written what's commonly known as 'word salad'..........Book critics would have a field day with that one page!!!
Yeah there’s just no flow!Urgh. this is the sort of writing that gives me a headache after a chapter.just because you can use 10 words to describe something doesn't mean you should.
I find this part hilarious : 'Alice allowed the question to unfurl within the recesses of her thoughts'......questions do not 'unfurl'.....to unfurl is to make something spread out that was once in a folded/rolled up state....That extract from his ‘novel’ is the biggest load of shite I’ve ever read. A dead fawn (misspelled) “flashed into existence” and caused the character to experience “playful curiosity”. Wtf lol. Never known a more pretentious twit in my life, he thinks he can turn his hand to anything and people will ‘faun’ over him.
I wonder do they ever do things the kids would enjoy?! You never see them post Christmas things or Easter bunny or anything other than them sat in wanky coffee shops! I'd say maybe they don't show kids things but they're happy to discuss the kids behaviour all over the internet so not like they don't show/talk about the kids!!
I remember a few Christmas vlogs where they bought beige wooden toys for Grayson- they refused to have plastic educational toys in the house. Hannah said they were ‘ugly’ and didn’t match her aesthetic!I wonder do they ever do things the kids would enjoy?! You never see them post Christmas things or Easter bunny or anything other than them sat in wanky coffee shops! I'd say maybe they don't show kids things but they're happy to discuss the kids behaviour all over the internet so not like they don't show/talk about the kids!!
I remember this too!!! I think this is probably where other mums started hating her! Felt like she was sticking her nose up at mums who did buy these kinds of things!!I remember a few Christmas vlogs where they bought beige wooden toys for Grayson- they refused to have plastic educational toys in the house. Hannah said they were ‘ugly’ and didn’t match her aesthetic!
This is a bugbear of mine with influencers, colours and contrast are literally serving the purpose of developing babies’ brains!I remember this too!!! I think this is probably where other mums started hating her! Felt like she was sticking her nose up at mums who did buy these kinds of things!!
This is a bugbear of mine with influencers, colours and contrast are literally serving the purpose of developing babies’ brains!